Man i think i really have the most unpopular opinion here. But the author or the artist of the manhwa just dosen't get the smut scenes. The author really knows how to build tension in the story and have seductive scenes but when it comes to actual sex scenes idk what happens. There is like no context and build up to these in the manhwa like they are in the novel. They should build sexual tension like first stripping him then stimulation and foreplay but the scenes are like: starts with a time skip the character is already naked and getting fingered. Transitions to fucking in like 3 frames. 1 position change throughout the sex scene with time skips in between. The characters are saying the same one line in the whole chapter just diffrent phrasing. There is no orgasm as if none of them are enjoying it. This has happened throughout the manhwa. The sex scenes are sudden, out of place and last for a short while just as we are getting adjusted to the pacing. I think this is the only elaborate sex scene we ever got except for the time they had sex for the very first time, that smut scene was S tier. A build up and proper leading up of the events and proper ending. Idk why i'm yapping so much but i want an elaborate sexy smut scene from these two. (▰˘◡˘▰)
Way to end the season when it was just getting spicier. I hope the chasing arc dosen't have the "i can't get hard without him" bullshit. And i actually hope their's a time skip, jk continues to suffer and dan matures and then they meet outside a coffee shop or sum park or buissness meet and greet etc. Jk begins chasing and dan is mature enough not to fall again and jk starts doing cute stuff dan treats him like how jk treated him previously and he fucking treats him like shit and dan gets kidnapped and jk is ready to sacrifice himself for dan and dan realizes and they have a emotional breakdown and and decide to take things slow. Also their is a new second ml in all of this to fuel jk's desire for dan and create competetion and desperartion for jk to be better, cause if i don't act good enough he'll just choose the other one.
"Bro you looking like a psychopath rn frfr" also funny how tay said vampires mark their lover/prey and ilay was standing there under the moonlight with blood in his mouth looking pale as ever. We need an aob vampire x werewolf passion edition rn.
(▰˘◡˘▰)Holy hell this is the most grabagest garbabe i've ever read. My precious time, oh my god, how many other stories i could've read in that time and be actually satisfied. 82 chapters wasted, thousands of words i laid my eyes on wasted. HOLY SHIT THIS IS HOT SHIT HOT GARBAGE. If people are coming here thinking there is gonna be a satisfying chasing arc RAHHH run away. If you think mc is gonna act smart RUN AWAY. Mc is the most dumbest dumb fuck to enter this dumb fuck story to ever have dumbed omfg. Hes so stupid he's literally a pushover who has a screw loose and should be in a mental hospital along with his boyfriend ass psychotic motherfucking dodoass king lover. No i'm not exaggrating, i wish i was joking. If you think this will have that jerk seme who falls in love and chases uke, NO. NO IT DOES NOT. Not in the way thats satisfying. YOU ARE WASTING YOU'RE TIME.
Thanks for reading my review
Guys i actually held the author at gunpoint to draw this chapter. To make the bitchy jerk jaekyung into a boy failure crying baby. I told them to clear our boy dan's name. I made them promise me to give our boy dan happiness. It wasn't easy but i did it.
All they did this chapter was send a message and throw a can. The pacing is so bad, like there is NOTHING happening in these chapters. I can't even remember what happened last chapter because there is nothing memorable happening. There is not one thing i can name from the chapters that caught my eye, it is so dead.
My family worshipping lakshmi in the background while me escaping to read this smut bl only to find her staring back at me. sorry for i have sinned
Ok but "you can't expect a neglected child to be a proper adult" hit hard. Many people around me have turned out this way. If you ever feel your childhood or any other period in life is affecting your current life too much don't hesitate to reach out. Help is out there
I think jaekyung and the other boxer would be a better ship. They match each others toxicity level and could beat each other both in the ring and the bed. Also i'm a sucker for enemies to lover so
Why are angel and demon kinda opposite. Like shouldn't the angel be telling him NOT to touch his boss while demon telling him to sin. But here it feels like the demon is the only one with braincells.
Xavier and Zayne left me and started dating each other.
GUYS IT'S 50 CHAPTERS IN AND I JUST REALIZED
: JAEKYUNG'S TRAINER IS THE SAME TRAINER AS ALEX FROM BJ ALEX.
I was scrolling ch 41 of bj alex and saw Alex's trainer and did a double take.
Just a quick question. Does it have smut scenes? Is it worth reading? The story good?
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- Author: Anhana
- Genres: Webtoons / Yaoi / Action / Adventure / Drama / Fantasy
For Tangbang, no lube, no protection, all night, all day, from the kitchen floor to the toilet seat, from the bathroom sink to the shower, from the front porch to the balcony, vertically, horizontally, quadratic, exponential, logarithmic, while I gasp for air, scream, and see the light, missionary, cowgirl, reverse cowgirl, doggy, backwards, sideways, upside down, on the floor, in the bed, on the couch, on a chair, being carrier, against the wall, outside, in a train, on a plane, in the car, on a motorcycle, on the back of a truck, on a trampoline, in a bounce, in the pool, in the garden, bent over, in the basement, against the window, having the most toe curling, back arching, leg shaking, dick throbbing, fist clenching, era ringing, mouth drooling, ass clenching, nose sniffing, eye watering, eye rolling, hip thrusting, earthquaking, sheet gripping, knuckles cracking, jaw dropping, hair pulling, teeth jitterbug, mind blogging, soul snatching, overstimulating, vile, sloppy, moan introducing, heart wrenching, spine tingling, back breaking, atrocious, gushy, creamy, beastly, lip biting, gravity defying, nail biting, sweaty, feet kicking, mind blowing, body shivering, orgasmic, bone breaking, world ending, black hole creating, universe destroying, devious, scrumptious, amazing, delightful, delectable, unbelievable, body numbing, bark worthy, can't walk, head nodding, soul evaporating, vulcano erupting, sweat rolling, voice cracking, trembling, sheets soaked, hair drenched, flabbergasting, lip locking, skin peeling, eye widening, pussy popping, nail scratching, back cuts, spectacular, brain cell devolving, hair ripping, show stopping, magnificent, unique, extraordinary, splendid, phenomenal, mouth foaming, heavenly, awakening
Hear me out. When you're in a room and someone farts, no one says anything. They ignore it. But now if the person poops there then everyone's gonna be like "what you doing bro stop.
So...people look at the results, what this story is doing rn is farting. And it's fuckin miserable. But let it fart and wait for the result that'll make headlines. Trust the process.