
I hated the ending. Careful, spoilers ahead.
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I thought the ending would be more developed, either by both Ui and Anzam ending together in hell or together in heaven. Since Ui did have a few wishes granted by a demon, it means she's going to hell when she dies, so if Anzam had stayed a demon they would be together in hell. But since all of her wishes, except for the very first one (marrying Anzam) were completely and utterly selfless I thought they would at least save her soul or turn her into an angel, so since they forcefully turned Anzam back into an angel, they would be together even after she dies. But noooo, they decided to just have Anzam turn human, meaning he doesn't have all of his super powers and isn't immortal anymore. Ui's gonna die at 39, go to hell and unless Anzam sins a lot he'll end up back in heaven and both of them are going to be separated after death. LAME
Plus, the reason why Anzam fell was because someone killed some angels? Why are demons immortal but angels aren't? Why didn't god know shit? He's supposed to be omniscient and why did hell seem like a better place to be than heaven? Those angels seemed like a bunch of jerks while the demons seemed like fun guys. I don't have a problem with the story making hell and demons seem like fun, but at least make heaven a bit more appealing for god's sake

Yes, yes, Yuuma's injury was more serious than they thought so they had to explain how it happened, meaning they just had to say a crazy old man making a fuss about stand placements at the festival pushed Yuuma and he fell down on the grill while they were at Sou's acquaintance's stand. Why was it necessary to say they were ex Yakuza? That's way beyond the point. Also, what's up with the 5 year separation? That came out of nowhere. Some of the conflicts in the story were just nonsensical tbh

It was kinda twisted at the beginning but surprisingly I really liked it, although I wish the story developed more to the point where Take and Mine's relationship were equally as good as Hiroi and Mine's. I know each person is different so relationships are different between them but for some reason in yaoi threesomes there's always this kind of unbalance. I wish there were a story where all three of them were in love with each other and not just two people sharing one person

Yeah, I know but it's just not shown clearly, that's what I meant. I mean, Take did say it clearly to Hiroi that he liked Mine and Mine did admit to himself that he didn't hate Take and would even kiss him when greeting him but they don't know each other's feelings. They each still think they are being hated and barely tolerated. Also, when I said "in love with each other" I meant all three of them. Take and Hiroi aren't in love, they are part of each other but not in love with each other.

Well, for this story I guess I'd be satisfied as long as Take and Mine knew they loved each other. It's even fine if they keep bickering since that's their thing, as long as they know each other's feelings. Hiroi and Take are fine the way they are since that's how it is in this story, but I'd like more yaoi threesome stories where all three are in love with each other instead of two people in love with the same person and deciding to share him.

Is it just me? I'm in the middle of reading the first chapter and I keep thinking how Ichinose is really irritating. Like, you're in the middle of sex, stop talking and trying to push your own ideals onto the person and just get on with it. Kanzaki is doing it because he likes it, why are you telling people how to have sex and who to have it with? Seriously I would be soooo turned off if a sex friend were to tell me they love me in the middle of sex, but then again I would've been already turned off by all the previous yapping. I like how couples communicate during sex in some scenes in yaoi, it's incredibly cute and I certainly wish there were more works like that, but in here they aren't a couple and the guy is just talking nonsense. I think I'm dropping it

Oh, I read the raws, not the translated version. Idk if the translations are out yet but if they aren't here, then I doubt it, sorry! (I'm a translator myself, so I mostly read raws instead of the translated versions whenever I can find them)
If you're curious about the raws, I think I got them from yaoiotaku

Ugh... It can get really funny at times but the main character is so stupid. I know the story is about the main character learning stuff about LGBT little by little and start accepting it, but he keeps making the same mistake over and over and over again and making narrow minded comments that end up hurting the people around him. Geez
omg that ending was waaaay too cute!