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There's so much going on in this episode...
It's becoming too much for me tbh... I get it, but it's kinda silly that they all look at a 10yo and see her as a enemy. I know the guy is angry due to his son being expeled from the academy, but to the point to use a soul piercing dagger to kill a child??? It's kinda random for me, the author could show more of his rage so we all could understand where it came from, not just say "oh he spent a lot of money on the academy, how dare you?"
I would prefer to see a little bit of his pov as how he felt humiliated by it and judged by all the nobles, his wife was angry and insufferable and they were goinf bankrupt. Idk, I just assumed that it could'd happened, but then if the author showed smt like that I could understand why this guy was so mad to the point of wanting to destroy a child's soul...
The Mr. Rabbit pedant is also getting silly... Idk, probably because I personally didn't like the name and his personality. His speech bubble is like a popup from a game and the concept is so random?? She is inside a novel, not a game, so why? He could speak in an ancient language that she didn't understand or something more magical, not just that random tech speech bubble
And dad and the emperor saving her, running from the collapsing building, emperor sacrifices himself for them, emperor almost dying, dad and emperor talking and making peace with each other... Too much for just one episode. They "hated" each other for so much that I'm waiting for a heartfelt intimist conversation. I would prefer if the emperor got hurt and went into a coma and dad would be devastaded wondering why the emperor saved him this time, then when the emperor waked up they could've a conversation and talk about everythint slowly. It would be so much better...