
Does anyone else feel like Hyera, though she was a villain, is the only character that seems to be decently written?
What I’m saying is she had a character arc whereas all of the other characters just feel one dimensional and stereotypical to me. Minji (I think that’s her name) is the stereotypical cutesy bottom. Yuna is the stereotypical attractive top. It’s just… boring.
Like I said, fully aware Hyera is meant to be an antagonist but at LEAST she spiced up the story. I found myself only really enjoying it when she was around. And I WISH this was longer so I would’ve got to see and read more about her. Shes really the only interesting character here… sorry :/

Every story has a sterotypical character. Her being a mean girl stereotype WASNT the point of my comment????
The point was her being more developed character wise from a WRITERS standpoint than the other characters.. this is exactly why I titled this “might get downvoted” because of a clear misinterpretation on your part.
“Has more data” has more depth*** that was the point of my entire comment brother.

Maybe you’re the rock since it takes a while for you to comprehend a relatively easy way explanation. You used “data” while I’m describing the DEPTH a character has. You can keep going back and forth over yourself clearly misinterpreting something and overall replying to me for absolutely no reason, or you can open your mind to comprehend something that’s easy to understand.
Maybe I need to explain it so you can actually understand what I was saying, if you even have the capacity to read this much.
Stereotypical characters are fine but the issue is when they’re poorly written or under written. I’m a writer myself. Minji is the perfect example of what I’m talking about. She’s a trope you see in almost every other yuri. It’s the same repeated thing and her character isn’t given an actual personality other than the fact that she’s an emotional, cutesy bottom. That’s it. That’s the character. Yuna isn’t given a personality other than she’s lesbian, jealous and hot. That’s it. That’s the character.
It FEELS underdeveloped. And everyone that reads this writer unfortunately knows she needs an author that can properly write characters.
Whereas Hyera actually got a bit of depth to her character. We see her personality and emotions shift and vary so many times in BTD and it feels authentic. Hyera got the time to have some actual good character development that makes her work as an antagonist, whereas Minji and Yuna’s arch felt rushed and overall forced. All of the piles of drama also feel forced.
Hopefully you can understand the fact that I’m not directly talking about the characters themselves I’m talking about the way this was written. This is so easy to comprehend and I don’t think I should’ve had to give an essay on it either.

I’m 100% certain gege’s thought process with jjk was “hey let’s make an overpowered villain kill everyone while innocent people get gruesomely brutalized” don’t get me wrong I love villains in anime and manga but come on now bruh it’s the same shit. Sukuna fights someone, they die protecting someone else, Yuji gets traumatized again. For no reason.
Fine. Respect to gege for making jjk, but I don’t even think he thought it out fully. Let’s say Yuji dies. THEN WHAT? Yuji is dead, what, Sukuna’s just going to keep killing everyone till there’s nobody left? It’s so lame now. This is exactly why I dropped jjk. But fuck it I guess, it’s his manga. Don’t know what the hell he’s doing with it though.

Woowon better not lose his memory if he gets hit by the bus. Im genuinely tired of this trope. Me personally I just think it’s unnecessary angst. Realistically why did he even chase after his father like brother he just ran away from you thinking he just killed you… he do not give a fuck about you

I took the fact that he didn't seem to know why was going on, and him actually not knowing where his dad was and looking for him as though he should be there is a pretty good indication that he lost that but of his memory.
1. Pretty much anyone who gets hit on the head and then wakes up alone would know pretty instinctively that the other person must have done it and that if they're not there they ran away.
2. If he had remembered that his dad had tried to kill him, or rather anyone in his shoes, would likely take a few minutes to emotionally quarrel with the fact that their own parent just hit them over the head with a bottle and instead of calling an ambulance, they ran away.
Regardless though, this was a pretty shit chapter all around. Nothing happened except the possible death of one or both of them, potential temporary or permanent harm, and most definitely a changed relationship. The dad was always trash, but this is the first time he ever tried to kill family members.
The only good things I liked about this were the art and the dog being adorable.
Alot of things I don’t like, but let’s discuss the obvious part.
The rape at the end was absolutely unnecessary and quite frankly just disgusting.
The story overall feels rather rushed and boring. I feel like if you’re going to do something then do it all the way. If you’re going to create a story then put everything into it. Don’t half ass it or leave things unexplained, or rush into things. Our main characters had sex without even knowing eachother’s names. Seriously. How realistic is that. I mainly skimmed through the sex scenes because I didn’t even feel any chemistry between them.
(Do not reply to me if you’re trying to justify anything wrong with this manhwa, you’re wasting your time, trust me. Ts turned out to be ass and everyone and they mama know it.)
it's not supposed to be realistic. it's a one shot story, ofc it would be rushed plus this is obviously a fap gooner manhwa why are u expecting a top global story line
Baby, a one shot is one chapter, not multiple, I have a right to dish out constructive criticism if I thought it was ass. There was 12 chapters of this but the story or romance wasn’t properly written out. Hence the half assed writing. This is MEANT to be pwp, not pwop. So obviously if you decide to write out a plot and I take the time to read it I’m going to be disappointed that it’s bad.
Unfortunately I’m not a 14 year old gooner degenerate anymore, I will recognize bad writing and weird plot decisions and I will, as the consumer, say it’s bad.
Genuinely seen other authors write better things in an ACTUAL one shot or under 12 chapters it’s really nothing you can say other than the fact that the story and the romance is underdeveloped
you're saying all this while giving it three points despite of it having r4pe scene, what a hypocrite. i wasn't even justifying it, i was saying that this is afap gooner material and not some serious ass top goobal writing story.
Hypocrisy literally doesn’t apply in this context dumbass 3 stars because it had the potential to actually be interesting before it flopped. Put your thinking cap on homegirl.
Regardless it being “gooner material” doesn’t save the multiple points I’ve made. Look at it from a writers standpoint before you type your next reply.
Ts is unwiped ass you cheeks you are not changing my mind
Like genuinely what am I supposed to say sorry I don’t like shitty porn without plot half assed rushed stories??????? Herro.