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Ch 126 felt so out of place and disappointing. O.o What is with this sudden "gloss over events, poorly summarize what happened, ope time for a time-skip!" It just feels so poorly placed to suddenly throw this at us. These events have been built up over chapters, with breadcrumbs consistently being laid, only for... a paltry summary? It feels so out of place!

I surmise there will be "flash backs" to this time we just skipped to fill us in. However, that simply feels cheap after sooooo many chapters of build up. It feels like the artist was tired and didn't want to draw battle scenes so they simply skimmed over everything and wrapped it up with "this happe d, that happened, now moving on!"

I'm going to wait until at least ch146 to pick this one back up. If I try sticking with weekly updates, with the way the story is now, I'll only become more frustrated than I already am.

This is fast paced in a very jarring way. It feels like someone had an idea and made a rough outline... then pushed forward to get it finished as-is. It's a shame since the art is quite pretty!

The chapters are short and each one feels like half of the panels have simply been omitted. It gives a sort of whiplash that leaves "did I miss something?" constantly ringing in my head. Things happen simply to happen. I tried to keep reading to see if it got any better; it didn't. The entire story feels like a jigsaw puzzle that was forced together leaving gaps between every piece.

To top it all off it's full of non-con/r*pe! There is so much of it that it leaves me wondering if I'm supposed to like any of the characters, or if the intent was simply to write out some half-baked dirty fantasy.

Overall it feels clumsy.

The translations are a bit all over the place. This didn't seem to get much of a proof-read before being posted. Genders get switched around, words left out, some bubbles are empty or repeated, and overall a lot is lost in the translations. It feels a bit like it was machine translated without anyone to look over it.

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