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From Good Girls Scans BL:“Shall we get married?” — A fake marriage between two men...

This makes me think of a first time author who jotted down a bunch of ideas and was determined to fit all of them in. It leads to fast pacing, overused cliches and awkward characters. It feels like it wasn't well thought out, and instead has been rushed to completion. Just another MC who activley works towards changing a plot only to... be suprised/worried the plot is changing

I can already see the checklist
-cold ML who falls for FL instantly, despite notoriously not liking women
-cold ML who is only warm to FL (for some reason this is supposed to show how special FL is, instead of the reality ML is self centered)
-ML is so crazy for FL he is obsessive/possesive, (cuz apparently that's supposed to be "sweet")
-contract relationship with time limit (that will constantly be mentioned)
-FL takes over evil woman, begins acting nice
-abused child who is suddenly treated well (since trauma is apparently easily fixed with a smile)
-Prince who likes/needs FL (because we need royal drama)
-magic that is unique to FL (need some excuse for her to be relevant, after all)
-FL starts to fall for ML, but thinks he doesn't like her (again, need drama)
-ML likes FL but won't just say it until much later (I guess honesty is less entertaining than season long miscommunication/misunderstandings)

Art is pretty tho. Gotta at least give em that.

From Lezhin:<br >After ending an on-again, off-again relationship of 10 years, Minsuk decides ...

Cute art and characters, that's for sure!

However... I wish it wasn't so short. It really left me feeling like this was an unfinished draft that was changed into a short story. No character development, no real info on the characters in general- just short fluff. I can tell the writer put thought into it from the author's note... so it would have been nice to see that realized.

As pretty and cute as it was, I felt rather meh about it. MC felt very childish and only gets his way through his tears. He comes across as a total child. I understand that ML finds that "endearing" but as a reader it feels kinda off putting. All I can think of MC as is a manchild who would need ML to play the mommy role. It just reminds me of all the women complaining that their men expect them to do everyyyything to the point of feeling like a mom. xD

I wish this was at least 20 chapters and that they touched on A) MC taking care of himself like an adult B) brief explanation of imprinting, or hinting that they imprinted C) ML voicing his thoughts D) MC doing something to show ML he cares for him beyond just crying.

Why did it have to go the full blow rape with a bleeding arsehole route?! "We love you, so let us get you drunk and then use you like an object with no care for your wellbeing," is such an unneeded aspect to add into this. Why throw in the whole "love" word when they are more focused on their own physical pleasure than his? It would have been perfectly fine if they went the drunken "mistake" route where they coerced him into it type of noncon. But nopppppe. They go the rape with no regard for his body's health route. A torn anus and undoubted hemmroids for the poor Uke in this one. :(

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Renta: Yutaro Tsutsumi has got no job, no home, and no girlfriend, and he blames it all on his evil-...

Zhi Banyi has a secret. His heart only beats faster when he listens to a streamer called "Dust ...

It's decent in terms of the outcome.... but the execution of it all is really sloppy.

It feels rushed and like she simply stumbled into it. If it was that easy to get rid of him, then why did it take soooo darn long? She didn't succeed through a smart plan: things went wrong yet magically fell into place. Feels really hollow to me.

I get that this was a smut first and plot comes second, if that, kind of story but... building so much dislike around a character for such an u rewarding send off is pretty disappointing. Feels like the author got tired and decided to wrap things up as quick as possible.

“I’ll repay that 450 thousand for you…but in exchange, you’re mine.” ...

What type of misunderstanding warrants this?! Are they going to make us believe it's because MC didn't want "ML" to get adopted?

Guy who is your friend and you rely on doesn't want a certain family to adopt an omega.... maybe it's because that famy is bad news?! Please tell me this isn't all it takes. If this is the misunderstanding, a simple MC trying to protect ML being misunderstood? If so that's hella lazy writing.

Because how does it make sense you would trust/care about someone enough to be hellbent on getting revenge, but not even bother to make sure your assumption about them is correct? How do you make that jump with direct proof they were involved?

For example: If I was kidnapped and was told "your husband sold you to us" well... I wouldn't believe it. Unless I saw video evidence, or him in person, conducting the sale- I'd consider it the lamest attempt at turning me against him. Why? Because our history together let's me know that would never happen.

So how can ML trust/care about MC sooooo much that he wants to get this crazy revenge and yet put 0 time thinking or caring about why MC has been looking for him? Like, that is such a forced misunderstanding- if that's what it's supposed to be. MC is literally crying out his name and willing to do whatever to find Mido. So all ML has to do is ask why? Why do you want to find him?

But no. Instead it is a stupid rapefest every damn chapter. This feels like "No Reason" all over again.

Seo Jaewoo wakes up to find himself in the world of a BL novel. But he isn’t just any random p...

This had the ingredients needed for a recipe that would make a good yaoi... until it was ruined with the non-con. It makes it difficult to like the Seme when he is constantly strong-arming the Uke.

All those good ingredients- humor, misunderstanding trope, contrasting personality of introver vs extrovert, dual animal lovers.... and then the undercooked meat is the apparent necessity to have non-con sex served up consistently. Why?! There was an actual chance and laid out set up to have these two bond normally. Instead it goes the direction of having Seme come across as both sex crazed and boundry breaking. He has traits that should be likeable simply shattered by his behavior.

It feels like the writer was too impatient to flesh out a scenario where the two characters could have consensual sex, and resorted to forced non-con to "get the plot moving."

I wanted to enjoy this. I even started to envision the ways this could have gone. Instead of that, I was met with disappointment as soon as it went the forced route, and became fed up when it resorted to sticking to it. Now all I can envision this story ending up as is the miserable trope of a forced Uke suddenly "getting hooked on sex" and giving in to the bully Seme, with a forced "happy ending" at the end that is supposed to be believable- when in reality that's not how things work. I get that it's fiction, sure. But that kind of overplayed and heavy handed plotline is too brain numbing for me to want to continue.

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Ch 126 felt so out of place and disappointing. O.o What is with this sudden "gloss over events, poorly summarize what happened, ope time for a time-skip!" It just feels so poorly placed to suddenly throw this at us. These events have been built up over chapters, with breadcrumbs consistently being laid, only for... a paltry summary? It feels so out of place!

I surmise there will be "flash backs" to this time we just skipped to fill us in. However, that simply feels cheap after sooooo many chapters of build up. It feels like the artist was tired and didn't want to draw battle scenes so they simply skimmed over everything and wrapped it up with "this happe d, that happened, now moving on!"

I'm going to wait until at least ch146 to pick this one back up. If I try sticking with weekly updates, with the way the story is now, I'll only become more frustrated than I already am.

This is fast paced in a very jarring way. It feels like someone had an idea and made a rough outline... then pushed forward to get it finished as-is. It's a shame since the art is quite pretty!

The chapters are short and each one feels like half of the panels have simply been omitted. It gives a sort of whiplash that leaves "did I miss something?" constantly ringing in my head. Things happen simply to happen. I tried to keep reading to see if it got any better; it didn't. The entire story feels like a jigsaw puzzle that was forced together leaving gaps between every piece.

To top it all off it's full of non-con/r*pe! There is so much of it that it leaves me wondering if I'm supposed to like any of the characters, or if the intent was simply to write out some half-baked dirty fantasy.

Overall it feels clumsy.

The translations are a bit all over the place. This didn't seem to get much of a proof-read before being posted. Genders get switched around, words left out, some bubbles are empty or repeated, and overall a lot is lost in the translations. It feels a bit like it was machine translated without anyone to look over it.

You’re always in my memories!Lee Taegun is a S-Class Esper who refuses to be guided due to tra...