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I... don't get MC's behavior. O.o He is aware supernatural exists and that he is at risk.
Yet he repeatedly sees/hears/feels things that are CLEARLY supernatural and his response is allllllways "huh, that's weird. what's this?" and proceeds to act like a character in a scary movie that goes to examine a sound while being chased by a killer. Like... what? I don't... does he keep getting brainwashed? Is that it? Is every single thing supernatural able to turn your thinking skills off?
If so, that's going to make for one hella boring read. An MC who can do nothing but mindlessly follow a sirens call. Wow. Riveting. :/