beta
I started out enjoying this, but the last 10 chapters have just felt like the story is dragging it's feet. I don't feel any real interest in continuing because it feels so... static and predictable?
The story is based around the game/guild community but shows very little understanding about what that actually entails. It makes it feel really outta place for someone who is actually a hard-core gamer. In the beginning that was fine. I figured the "game" aspect was just an extra setting flare. But no. They revolve everything around in game drama etc yet it's written like it's by someone who has never gamed. (It feels like watching someone pretend they play basketball, only to see they never dribble the ball.)
It wouldn't bother me so much if the story felt so one note. MC is blushy and easy to rile. ML is pushy and easy to amuse. That's it. One says "stop touching me" and the other goes "I'm not touching you." That essentially the entire story, repeated again and again through small actions.
The art is good. The characters are relatively likeable. The dialogue is cohesive and humorous. Overall this isn't a bad story! I can see why one may enjoy it. It's a good fluff read. Characters are enjoyable.
As an avid gamer, however, this left me feeling annoyed despite having cute moments.