beta
This is good yet felt unsatisfying at the same time. Art is good, plot is nice and characters are interesting. However... it has a heavy tone that it doesn't quite deliver on. It feels like it should have been quite a bit longer.
It has topics such as death, rape, abuse, neglect and more yet they are handled so lightly. They will be touched on, the depth occasionally acknowledged, and then moved on from instantly. This feels unfufilling.
There are also a number of things that feel as if they've been left unanswered, but in a way it felt like they were forgotten about.
Basically- it feels like a full length novel was condensed into a short story. Enjoyable but like something is missing.