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If you want to try sexual choking please do NOT do it this way. You should apply pressure to the SIDES of the neck!! The goal is not to damage the windpipe. Doing it the way shown is suuuuuuuper dangerous!
It is a beginner misconception you are supposed to crush the airpipe. What you want to do is squeeze the sides of the neck. It is the blood flow being interrupted and then returned that brings euphoria. The actual air being withheld is more of a side effect due to positioning of such arteries.
(I am not complaining about it being put in story this way, or saying it is unrealistic- it's just a super duper big no for a beginner irl.)
This story had a good concept but poor execution. It feels disjointed and decides to focus on all the wrong areas. The end is a prime example- it spends a lengthy time tying up a subplot, and then a handful of panels on the main couple. :S
Set up and no delivery.
Everything that is introduced is treated like a thruway line, brought back only when needed.