but real question though hoe do artists come up with a birthday for their oc's?
lmao sorry, a serious answer: Idk if Korean webtoon creators are the same, but Japanese artists like to use meaningful holidays sometimes. Like a romantic character gets 2/14 (valentines), a childish character gets 5/5 (children's day), a fool gets 4/1 (april fools), or a rabbit themed character gets 8/2 (ba-ni).
Children's day is quite popular so a lot of characters I know have 5/5.
A. I like how Ayane expressed the ptsd, and her actually not wanting to be touched by him. Also her actually expressing not wanting, to live with the baby daddy grapist.
B. Seriously why the fuck wud u think the best plan is to be seduce, your grapist and balckmailer, even to create evidence??
C. Souma being a lil wet sponge. Sir, you yourself literally said, its weird to confess to a highschool senior, as a older uni med student. So why tf did u continue stalking? Like u went home and, said oh its okay today lets do this again tomorrow!!?
D. where did ur med student brain go? Isnt the foundational rule, as a doctor to keep calm under emergencies (yes family and close one can effect mental state) but like damn. Ur like shes not feeling well. Then call the fucking ambulance.
Shes going to a sus construction, site where she could faint, get injured, or die. CALL the freaking police and the paramedics. Heck if ur a med student going there, you can read the university hospital emergency services. UR NOT SUPERMAN OR BATMAN.
E. good job on stopping urself from biting, and telling her to run. But even if reverse graped u with dubious consent, and told u it feels nice to bite her, u shudve said no. Not be goddamn tempted. If anything, you could play dead. or act crazy, so she runs away.
F. Also if u felt sorry, send a apology letter, offer to pay child support, what is chasing her to apologize do? Its only gonna make u feel better to see ur crush not the other way around.
G. also ur desperate to see her, but why the fuck u dont communicate about what happened? We get u had some trauma left over, and fucked up career, but ugghghhghghgh
H. Also like the whole ayane remembering her memories like i wish she asked, about the memories. Like hey, u know i kept calling u a rapist right? u said I don't what happened 5 yrs ago? what do u mean? is that a lie? what happened? Or even like burst in and ask.
I. Also, doing that ur better off without me thing. it felt too rushed, i rlly wanted them to sit down and talk, what happened. also damn their kid trusts strangers too darn easy
J. not a happy ending just unsatisfied
FL i do love her giving people the benfit of doubt, and getting her revenge, but why the fuck does every mainish chara want to hog the spot light?
The way its done, it cuts the main action scenes, into long ass honestly, no one fucking asked for your life story of all these characters, espcially the FUCKING EMPRESS.
God move your autistic ass elsewhere, its like she got authority without the cardinal guy, why is she walking around in that ugly ass, leotard, and ballet shoes? when everyone else got ful lon ball gowns, like at least pick a better fit. They try to act like she's got authority, but she's way too autistic coded. They say she founded the whole empire and shit, barely show her fight in the tomb, and mainly asked around the 5 kings, I don't even see the point of them re raiding the tomb, (this part was more rethorical, yes ik its cuz the monsters popping up)
The freaking cardinal dude is giving psycho pedo vibes, and the blondie lil attentionwhore, dad who hates on the mc, and tries to kill her for god knows what reason, and honestly, idk if there was even a proper reason for the dad to help the cardinal, he abandons the daughter when she was six, takes her in only to drop her in the tomb, idk why him and the dead wife hate her so much?
Also lynn/lin i mean ya sweet puppy boi, with a hidden twist, aint much to say about him so far, aw well as the fluffy loli maid.
It feels pretty rushed the pacing of it drawn out.
I like how instead of getting hung up on dissing the ex, and gaslighting mc cuz jealousy like the other mls, he's like my girl's too good of for him