I bet he and his no good brother are pregnant! If this is so, he should leave all three of them, and start over with his baby. The Alpha, Omega, and his Omega older brother are all a load of hot boo boo!

PLEASE STOP IT WITH THE BLACK PANTS when having intimate moments! The running joke has lost its stem. I want to see his entire naked body. Or is it that the NEW ARTIST CANNOT DRAW ALL OF THE PATTERNS!

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I think that some have MISINTERPRETED the relationships between Master, Minhwin, and their son.

1) Originally, Master was the one who tricked Minhwin into getting pregnant. It WAS ONLY when he discovered that the Child would kill and eat Minhwin at birth that he tried to abort it.

2) Minhwin nearly died to protect the unborn kill, even after hearing that the baby would have the desire to kill and eat him.

3) Therefore, you have to realize that it took time to train the baby not to try and eat Minhwin, when he recovered after giving birth.

4) Master has always stated that he was "jealous" and did not like that Minhwin spent so much time with the kid. That is why, he would throw the ball (as if he was a pet dog) so that he could have some alone time with Minhwin. Minhwin even told Master to stop doing that.

5) Throughout the side story, you always seeing Minhwin holding or carrying Tae-Heo lovingly, and a few times, he reminded him that the Master would not like it. Plus, he named his son after his beloved older dead brother.

6. Tae-Heo is loved by everyone in the Demon cult, especially by his uncles who watched over him after his birth, when Minhwin was near death.

7. Master only told Tae-Heo not to bother Minhwin while he was training for the competition because he wanted Minhwin to focus, because Master knew Minhwin's father would be there, and he wanted him to realize what he lost and threw away in Minhwin.


8) Again, while he call both parents Master, he loves them, and he know that they love him. Both parents always shows concern for him in their own ways. One of the funny moments was when Master confronted Minhwin on why he put Tae-Heo in the competition when he was usually so protective of him, and Minhwin did it so that Tae-Heo would learn the lesson that other children could be just as strong or stronger than him.


This, this is a loving family!

I felt NOTHING reading these last two chapters... Therefore, I REGRET ever reading this story as well. Something just seemed off in the end. The ending was so rushed to put them together that I felt No Emotional Connection to the storyline. It is sad to see a story that had great potential go downhill so fast.

Elijah went from weak to strong to pathetic again in the end. Even the words out the characters mouths did not match up with what we have known about the characters. Therefore, Her character regressed in my opinion. This was too fake in the end, and I will be lowering my original rating for this story.

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Run Matthew Run! He is using you if he is seeing Brandon's face while you are doing it. Blame it on the drugs, but those two have unresolved history!!!

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It was stupid of them to relax when a psycho was still on the run. Also, considering their lifestyle, it made no sense that they would not be aware of the danger still out there. NONE OF THIS MAKES SENSE from a logical perspective. Especially, knowing how obsessed "big brother" is for his Omega!

I agree with the person who said the story was not flushed out! This story had so much potential; however, it has gone down hill!

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He is just too cute. Even when he wants to kill, he is truly adorable. Toma could lean a lot from this child! Although, I still like Toma too.

Her powerful Guild could have gotten the ingredients! They should have told her the truth. Her power reaches out beyond their base.

Growing up, I was a spoiled brat too. However, I grew out of it around the age of 21. Although, at my current age, some people think I am still spoiled. I like Toma, but he is out of control. This time he was safe; however, he could have gotten kidnapped. Boundaries need to be set.

I feel like crying for Jihyuk! Boy, I knew I did not like his brother for some reason. Now, his pathetic behavior at times makes sense. He was afraid of being abandoned again.

I say this for all of us. Toma needs a nice spanking! Yes, I said it. I hate seeing out of control kids. It shows a lack of home training!!!

I say this for all of us. Toma needs a nice spanking! Yes, I said it. I hate seeing out of control kids. It shows a lack of home training!!!

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He's a maniac fighting for his man! Now, the main story is coming full circle. You all will recall that the perverted shaman would have blocks when it came to Boss, because he never realized his true feelings. Well, now he have put it all out there! So, cute

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Will his big brother turn out to be a gangster? I wonder because he looks like one!

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It was obvious that Howe had developed feelings for her before Catherine died. That's why he ghosted her. These two would be the best match.

She only got with Keith because her ex had cheated on her with Howe's sister. Therefore, Keith was the rebound guy, and Howe can be the true love.

You would have thought that the Duke and Jeremy would have been at the trial. To be honest, the trial was anticlimactic and I am a little disappointed.

Pause: sidebar (Where are the Duke, Elijah's maid, Jeb, and Jeremy?) I am expecting the rallying of the troops. Here is something light since I am usually so deep in my analysis of the story.

What might have been, if Edmund would have went to either Raymond or Elijah with the truth? Elijah has always expressed a desire to save Edmund if possible from the end result of death. She was an ally that he never considered. However, he was caught in a no win situation. He tried to fight the corruption from within and lost. He was no match for his mother. Therefore, he should have said something to Raymond or Elijah, but even that is a catch 22 situation as well. Damned if he do it and damned if he don't.

It is ironic that both Raymond and Edmund becomes the sacrificial lamb. Raymond was willing to die to save Carlyle, and Edmund becomes the sacrificial lamb to atone for his Mother's sins. In turn, the sins of the mother and father falls upon their individual sons. Thereby, saying this, Carlyle becomes the sacrificial lamb for the sins of the corruption within the royal family itself.