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This has a very well- balanced art style and story.
'-The game world/part was easy to understand. Unlike some gaming BLs I've read that makes it complicated.
-It seems a little rushed though. For a novel adaptation, it seems like it's in a hurry to finish. For example, Seyeong's family backstory took only like one chapter.
-Heejae, despite forcing himself to live with Seyeong in the beginning, is not really bad.
-What I noticed with most BL manhwas is they prioritize the characters looking pretty/beautiful so much that they look like dolls and when they express emotions, they look weird or constipated. Here, the artist managed to balance both beauty and effective expression of emotions. The comical drawings and chibis weren't overdone too.
-I really enjoyed this.
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It's a crime for this to be a one-shot. At least we know now that Tsujimura has also been watching Yoshimatsu. They have been mutually interested in each other for some time. "Everyone probably knows Tsujimura-san does not smoke" but he started going to the smoking area to talk and be friendly with his savior. Now that Yoshimatsu finally realized his feelings are not paternal, their love story is about to start.
I know it's impossibe but I really wish the mangaka revisits this one shot and write the continuation. It would be so funny when Yoshimatsu tells Tsujimura how he used to think of him as his only daughter.
5/5
Nacchan is wrong here BUT I still haven't moved on from when Issei pushed him to answer a phone call. That was cold. I know it's work and it's important but they just confirmed their mutual feelings after so many years. I admire and respect Issei for working hard and pursuing his passion but I can't connect with him.
Also, I think it was a little selfish that he unburdened himself by confessing and then cutting his best friend off from his life. Without thinking how his best friend must have felt after being left alone.
I feel like if I were Nacchan I will doubt the depth of Issei's feelings. He might just cut me off again because his passion is more important than his love for me (like in that phone call scene).
I agree with the comment below it's okay if they don't get together. They have different priorities. And Nacchan should focus on himself and find a way to quit that job and find something (another job, passion, or hobby) that he loves. I think a warm and empathetic partner would suit Nacchan more.
I think you described it really well. I don’t think he had to have declined the call or anything, but I can’t say I wasn’t startled when he shook him off like that. I was also a little off put by him just cutting contact cold turkey like that. Just because you graduate doesn’t mean you have to never contact people you enjoyed spending time with afterwards (??) I found it to be strange. It did feel a little like he didn’t want to put an effort in making the relationship last and just cut contact because it would be easier that way
On the other hand, Nacchan could have *definitely* spoken about his work troubles in a much different way, e.g. saying smth like seeing Issei do what he loves is making him have second thoughts about what he wants to do for a living, it’s inspiring to see him be able to enjoy his work, etc etc instead of just disregarding his efforts. Assumptions are never the right way to go about things, especially if there’s the possibility of hurting a loved one. It’s best to ask if you’re the only one who has felt that way, or if the other person shares the same struggles that you’re going through
here are your flowers bc you explained this so well
This was such a good description, exactly what I was thinking (๑•ㅂ•)و✧