I hate it when Ash says "that's my Lyle" I don't know why but it makes me cringe. I'm not a native speker, it feels corny but maybe I'm wrong. Can anyone enlighten me?
i think it’s corny too (not a native) idk it makes my cringe lmaoo
Well to be fair Ash says a lot of corny things. This is just the corniest
True
Dominate and corny. He likes to push Lyle to the edge, of course with his permission, but still, he was pissed regarding Lyle looking for a house, his rut and the mania of dominate him
YOURE SO REAL like I love them both but there’s been so many times I’ve just had to stop reading to avoid cringe overload
Well... it's a romance story.. it's supposed to be corny lol
Exactly I love them too and I love this story, but if there's a flaw it's this one
I disagree that romance stories are supposed to be corny
I know their dicks are unnaturally red, but I kinda like it. It makes me think of the blood flowing to those parts, and how engorged they must be, and how hot they must feel to the touch. So yeah I think it's a good choice.
I really don't care for the second couple at all... I always skip them :/
Im with you i try so hard to get interested in them but nope i just cant
It's not even that I don't ship them, I don't like them, there's nothing endearing or interesting about either
Same
dude totally the same the friend just seems creepy ngl and the friend's crush is not in the bit interesting.
I'm not gonna complain about toxic characters being toxic. But the sex looks uncomfortable as fuck. I can't get into the smut because it doesn't really feel pleasurable.
that last little kiss was so tender ughhh ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
does this get better? I'm at the first chapters. The premise seems HORRIBLE and the MC is pathetic.. is it worth reading further?
It’s not too bad, I’d say keep going.
don't waste precious time #－.－)
I absolutely hated this, made barely any sense absolutely zero character development and the ml is literal dog shit
Oh thank you for warning me but I stopped immediately, I couldn't stand either of them and I couldn't care less of what happened lol
begging to be loved ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ