Sometimes I wonder why yaoi has to escalate the way it does, with the seme coming on to the uke after communicating a total of, like, 3 times or when the uke very clearly isn't interested; I mean come on, dude, it doesn't work that way in real life - this ain't Sims 3, yo, you can't type in testingcheatsenabled true and drag the relationship bar to high and spam kiss -> make out -> propose steady like the premise of every cliche yaoi ever man that's just not how it w o r k s
Negativity aside, this is a very nice style so I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters. This art is so, so pretty.
An enjoyable read, although I feel like it needs one more chapter to feel complete. Also, I like how Daiki's appearance gives off an aura of frailness, but he's actually quite assertive and introspective (srs tho. His monologues/flashbacks take up a good portion of the manga haha). He's great.
Back to what I was saying -- the only problems I have is that the ending is a bit rushed, and Tatsumi doesn't have much characterization aside from being the troubled yakuza love interest. I think the whole deal with the yakuza overtook much of the development, because while Tatsumi and Daiki's relationship did come off as quite genuine (I actually have a soft spot for distant but affectionate semes who aren't complete sadists/jerks), there wasn't much going on between them within the events of the story (as in, excluding the flashbacks) because Tatsumi literally showed up for a few pages per chapter to intervene in whatever scene... up until he and Daichi hook up in chapter 4. And even then it was still a bit of an abrupt change considering prior, Daiki was very persistent in his feelings of "I can't possibly like Tatsumi" only to result in Daiki implying to have liked Tatsumi for some time by urging him on to confess his own feelings. And, of course, it culminates in obligatory hook up sex and... an implied happy (read: rushed) ending (??!??). Don't get me wrong, I liked this story a lot. I just feel like it needs another chapter - or volume, even - to elaborate on Daiki and Tatsumi's relationship.
normally this mangaka's art is impeccable, but oh man
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/12_ji_kara_hajimaru/mi/mi_chapter-1/11/
his fingerssss
i think it's an old manga of hers
I am pretty sure that this manga has been censored and someone tried to draw again the censored parts... I think that's why the art becomes weird only at the sex scenes :(
ooh thanks for the explanation, i think that makes the most sense. no wonder why the art seemed off at some points lol
The fingers and pen*is are not sensei's art! It's obvious ! There is a big diffrence between the black haired hand and Shoyo's