I hope nobody gets mad at this
Why does it seem like that the author made the mc dumb just for the sake of the plot? OKAY, I LOVE and absolutely ADORE the art style; I like how the ML is a green flag as well BUT when he literally said his phone got wiretapped and that he should lock his doors I really REALLY don't get why he doesn't use the peephole on the door? and bro he JUST called you—you think he got to your door like the FLASH? FUCK no
Where the dogs necessary? Oh my chat, to all who started reading this—trigger warning on chapter 11
I know that there are some cases when anatomy doesnt matter when artstyle is involved but in this one it just looks like the artist tries to make it look normal. It's like another manhwa like "THREE-WAY ROMANCE" the more you look at it the more that it looks wrong, if you don't see it I'm talking about: how the neck looks wrong in so many ways, When its close up shots sometimes the hair line disappears, the shoulder and the arm look too far apart, the hair on the bottom looks like it's a baby's hair, and in some panels bro looks like quagmire from Family Guy—
(Side Note: I know I do not have any right to comment about someone else's way of drawing and that I don't make manhwas but theres also something wrong other than the artstyle) !!
Not only the artstyle but also how it escalated (The storyboard), I don't get why it occured to this guy to do a breaking and trespassing THEN expecting that a rich guy with a huge house doesn't have a CCTV. He's homeless, sure and you have to do what you have to do in times of desperation. Does he lack awareness? Yes, because not only bro didn't bail when he stole some food but he ALSO took a shower.
Thank you for reading my yap session, I rate this yap session a 7/10.
God, Self-harm is so scary. Every time I see it I just can't help but urk, although I'm not saying it's disgusting It's just that I can FEEL it again.
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- Author: sano yuto
- Genres: Shounen / Monsters / Action / Comedy / Crime / Drama / Delinquents / Supernatural
As a chess player, it hurts to see the pieces get mistakenly placed or misused in manhwas like if you dont know how to play chess DON'T ADD IT THERE PLSS. Why are the kings touching?? I swear
TW: SEVERE BULLYINGIssa personal project, trying to improve my korean so bear with the slow af updat...
- Author: 2l
- Genres: Webtoons / Mature
Tanjiro was turned into a demon and Takeo joins the Demon Slayer Corps while taking care of his brot...
- Author: You Shi Ma
- Genres: Doujinshi / Yaoi / Shounen Ai / Supernatural
Fictional, Real or not. Incest is still incest. Some of you guys acknowledge that the story itself is incest not only does it contain that but the plot is confusing and bad, as one comment said 'does he still get his sun breathing?, How does he get his mark?, Where's nezuko?' and etc. The artstyle is appealing to the eyes but incest aside, the plot is bad. And I don't really get how SOME of you in the comments are labelling people that're mad at this because of incest as "kids" sure they're handling this immaturely but at least they know that incest is wrong itself.