The art is just so bad....it keeps taking me out of the story. I'm no artist but after having been fed GOOD ART, AND WHILE the story has potential, there are such cliche moments and TERRIBLE TERRIBLE art that I just can't. Stopped at ch. 14 or so.
Girl… the art is GOOD… the library and coloring are so well done.. I mean yeah the story is cliche and predictable.. but not too much on the artist
Girl… the art is GOOD… the lineart and coloring are so well done.. I mean yeah the story is cliche and predictable.. but not too much on the artist
Damn, you really thought you ate with this, huh?
I'm not sure what your comment means. I've had good art. This ain't it.
New to all this lingo.
But I could name a shitton od comics with good art.
Ahm Gen Z lingo. Yes, I did anticipate some ppl not agreeing with what I said. But this art, while not entirely suboar, took me out of the story time and time again. Your comment made me go back and look, and apparently it's up to ch. 27 now. Still glad I stopped at ch. 14. If I'm really bored maybe I'll pick it up way down the line somewhere.
*Subpar
LMFAO Yes, and? But I get art is subjective, but I really wouldn’t go and insult someone who took their time (probably hours) to draw these pieces and just have someone say “this is bad”. If you don’t like it, that’s fine. It’s not bad art, it’s just obviously not to your taste.
I hope you consider reading it again, I personally don’t think the story is awful.
You who have blocked me. You need to mark your comment as a spoiler. They ONLY dropped the teaser page. You're spoiling it for everyone including myself.
The checkbox for the spoiler is there FOR A REASON.
Not ONLY did you not edit it to make it as a spoiler and hide it, you also blocked me and didn't apologize.
You know what kind of reader you are?!? AN INCONSIDERATE ASSHOLE.
All you wanted to do was to spoil things for others, showing off OH-HOW-I-HAVE so read this and I now I want to spoil it IN YO' FACE. When someone tells you you've done something wrong then please fix it. But no, your intention is APPARENT. Showing an ABSOLUTE DISREGARD for other readers. What's so great about showing off to other readers you've read it?!? If you wanna discuss it go post it where the story has already been dropped in full. Your feed is full of spoilers.
Thanks.
This is the cutest. I wished the ending is a little more drawn out. Like maybe they'll start dating or something. Half the comics is about Nakagawa being horny as fuck and just ramming or fingering pure Mirase. I love their chemistry and dynamics. Poor Mirase turning gay at the speed of the election. I think Nagakawa has always been in love with him, but maybe never found the opportunity to. I think those two pretty kids Miya and Sam's, needs to get their ass kicked a few times cuz they not only caused drama for Mirase, but had him almost raped by two classmates while attempting to video record the scene. I would have slapped them silly. That would have been gratifying but the author chose not to have gone that way. Oh wells.