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i do think her being spineless could be an interesting flaw but i think the author shows it in a really repetitive way and it could be explored better. so far the reasoning for why shes so loyal to him is incredibly weak. like okay this is the story you want to tell but why should i as the reader care about this one trait being shown again and again when sihwa isnt even compelling to read about. i dont see why she should swoon over him.
also about the mom saying dont date her thing i think its just annoying that no one respwcts the eunseos autonomy and her wishes. her mother doesnt even call to say hey our family friend that you used to be really close to fucking DIED and im sending the son to live with you like regardless of the reason its a shitty thing to do to someone. like . nobody respects the fmc except maybe her silly friend and its not romantic at all...