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the whole damn read is like an insult to every sense of my being. I cannot and have not stressed enough how much I hate this manhwa, and Im here to say it again. Just READING the last chapter (side 122) felt insulting. Not only is the dialogue of the whole thing completely disingenuous, but corny and just unused enough that it's not caught off rip. The art starts off by tricking you into thinking oh this is fun, then oh it got better! to being the most predictable, shitty, ANNOYING marks ive ever laid eyes upon. Count how many times hoin suddenly grows fangs and his eyes start glowing, and every time it looks the exact same. its the same when any other character gets angry, but hoin just has the MOST fucking anger issues of them all, so we see it most in him. then on the other hand, also hoin, count how many times he's placated by his manipulative cheating boyfriend and his eyes start practically glowing and glistening. JUST LOOKING AT IT MAKES ME FEEL LIKE IM BEING MOCKED. the art is SO repetitive that is seems almost like the artist is just copy-pasting linearts for each scene. Its just the same damn cheesy "romantic" manipulative ass delusional ass disinegnuous ass lines and then they have sex, AND IT REPEATS OVER AND OVER, and it would be TOTALLY FINE. JUST ANOTHER SHITTY HALFBAKED ROMCOM DRAMA WHATEVER THE FUCK, but you can SMELL, like you can literally whiff out the author's overinflated ego, oh the audience just HAS to know how intelligent and how much of a virtuoso i am! i draw beautifully, i can draw the hottest scenes, and to top it all off, the story is so emotional and has such a beautiful message! my story is more than just smut, its a work of art. OH MY GOD BRO JUST ADMIT YOU'RE DRAWING PORN. YOU'RE DRAWING PORN AND YOU'RE FLESHING OUT CHARACTERS, BUT DONT ACT LIKE YOUVE WRITTEN LORD OF THE RINGS HERE, YOU'VE INTRODUCED CHARACTERS, EXPLAINED THEIR RELATIONSHIPS, AND DRAWN THEM FUCKING. THERE WAS NO PLOT, THERE WAS NO STORY, THERE WAS NO GREAT OVERARCHING THEME THAT DESERVES THESE DOUGHY EYED SPARKLING BLINDING LIGHT "WORLD OF OUR OWN" CORNY ASS CHEESY ASS DELUSIONAL ASS DIALOGUED SCENES. I ACTUALLY CANT TAKE IT, WHY IS THIS SHITTY FUCKING PORN BOOK ACTING LIKE IT'S ANYTHING BETTER THAN A 40 YEAR OLD WOMAN'S ONE OFF SMUT NOVEL NAMED "THE DUKE'S FIERY PASSION" OR SOME SHIT. i actually feel like im being insulted at every panel, be it "plot" or sex, every panel feels insulting