Such baka brothers... it was cute, and well-done. It is a bit better than the original... This was a nice little snippet of a 4-5 yr relationship from first look to first hook-up, and any future stories involving these two (or these four) would be welcome.
I adore stories where people are hiding their emotions and it's not utterly obvious with non-stop blushing... the characters are decent and adorable, as well.
Rocky start, misunderstandings, accepting family. All in all, pretty good.
I like that the family was actually addressed and that they accepted him so easily.
For once the family's own son was seen as the deviant, not the partner. But, oh boy, is that partner not nearly as fragile as he is treated...
For whatever reason I especially liked the friendship between the look alikes.
Certainly more intense than I originally expected xD
Extremely perverted, and forceful (but still brotherly ?!) seme. Their relationship starts off originally based on sex, with some clichés from “ahem” thrown in (which was the point), and then becomes kind of sweet while maintaining that intense state. I loved it!
The one-shot was a nice end to it all.