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I've binge all the 21 chapters and surprisingly I really like it lol. First of all, Naos is actually a respectful guy even though he's rather callous at the beginning. He's considerate to Pania and always ask for her consent so that's a great start.
Pania's body also has normal proportion, she doesn't have ridiculously huge bazoongas like a lot of FL in smut webtoons. She has a youthful appearance and a petite body but I know a lot of adult women with body and face like that, esp in Asian countries where I'm from lol. I also love that this is not just smut all over but actually does have a storyline to follow and it's not just 'stick it in and cum' but they do a lot of foreplays and basically it's all fun and sexy to read haha
I hope they continue this development of story. I love that Pania also trying to communicate to Naos so it doesn't become misunderstanding between them. I also hope that they keep this monoamory esp the sexual part, please let the guild master be nothing more than just a silly love rival to Naos (=・ω・=)
Pissed me off why that piece of shit JK even come and found him now of all times. I bet twenty dollars he didn't have a speck of remorse inside his dead-bird brain. I need him to suffer more and actually feel sorry and contemplates his wrongdoings to Kim Dan.
At least Jiwon from BJ Alex does think about his past action and feel actual remorse about it, and his awfulness is not even a quarter of what this bastard JK did, so I expect more from the author.
A part of me didn't want to see Kim Dan suffers more than he already is but also I feel like if that's necessary for that bastard to see the severity of his actions and actually grovel at Kim Dan's feet to apologize then so be it. Just not now, at least not yet. Not when that guy still don't understand the severity of his problem.