
This kind of story seriously needed more time. The uke seemed to have some really harmful thoughts about bi people and the seme clearly didn't understand much about queer people in general. The uke still calling the seme straight even after he DIRECTLY asked him if he was gay and was told "yes" was really irritating. I could go on a whole tangent about the smaller stuff too. None of this stuff is bad on its own I just wouldn't really liked it to be longer and fit some of the plot points to be fleshed out. It's a shame because this story had a lot of potential
Another hiatus bro?