beta
Okay, i still like it. But it felt like the author just jampacked too much climax right at the end of the main story lmfao. There was too much going on, and then there’s some random dream squished in between, sudden flashbacks, this random ‘writing the reality’ plot detail that didn’t have enough impact, and then bam bam bam right after the other more conflicts. They all get resolved so quick that we don’t even have the time to digest what happened right before LOL Then all of a sudden, a damn timeskip???? And then all of a sudden everything’s okay. I think it’s too rushed out of nowhere, what the hell happened to the pacing from previous chapters I think I’d have appreciated it more if it was paced better but it ended up being so unsatisfying with the way i resorted to rushing through pages because i was watching 6 more came-out-of-the-left-field problems. I’m just glad it’s a happy ending
I’m sad because I really loved it so much at the start to the middle of the story but the unexpected rush kinda ruined it for me. I also get this feeling that author originally planned for jiwoo or one of them to die but changed their mind lol