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Ok so I binged read this over the past two days.. I think what I personally did not like was the graphic rape scenes.. while it is part of the story it was hard to stomach as a reader, I think there might of been a better way to show this part of the story-
I’m not saying to remove it but visually it’s very graphic. It reminds me of the discourse around Berserk…
Anyway regardless of that I am not familiar with Egyptian mythology but this story has evolved quite nicely. So while I have criticisms I think it’s a good story none the less.
I am a Seth fan now, we love a complicated character ╮(￣▽￣)╭