I uh.. like how the story is progressing but uh.. don't wanna judge the artstyle too but still.. um.. doesn't that makeup look heavy in a way?.. no? Is it only me?
The eyeliner(?) and lipstick is too much, even though the latter is pink. The problem is that the MC is originally an adult who studied cosmetics for adults and it doesn’t seem like she had any practice with children. This also applies to the artist, of course, because I know the story will have characters praising her “beauty.” If anything, the MC should have a lip tint or something, but maybe that doesn’t exist in this world yet.
It's not just you. It's.....odd for a former mua and sales rep to be that intense about using a lot of cosmetics on a 13year old. I realized more than the art style, something else was just so distractingly off about reading this. Then I realized it was the backgrounds. they are usually just a gradient of colour. And not just for her thoughts or inner monologues. It was so painfully obvious in chapter 7 with all the disappearing furniture.
The eyeliner(?) and lipstick is too much, even though the latter is pink. The problem is that the MC is originally an adult who studied cosmetics for adults and it doesn’t seem like she had any practice with ... CuddleQuill
Hm yea a lighter makeup which gives a fresh look would suit her the best considering her age too
It's not just you. It's.....odd for a former mua and sales rep to be that intense about using a lot of cosmetics on a 13year old. I realized more than the art style, something else was just so distractingly off... donna
It's pretty undergraded. I just hope the artist kind of improve? Ig?..
I uh.. like how the story is progressing but uh.. don't wanna judge the artstyle too but still.. um.. doesn't that makeup look heavy in a way?.. no? Is it only me?
The eyeliner(?) and lipstick is too much, even though the latter is pink. The problem is that the MC is originally an adult who studied cosmetics for adults and it doesn’t seem like she had any practice with children. This also applies to the artist, of course, because I know the story will have characters praising her “beauty.” If anything, the MC should have a lip tint or something, but maybe that doesn’t exist in this world yet.
It's not just you. It's.....odd for a former mua and sales rep to be that intense about using a lot of cosmetics on a 13year old. I realized more than the art style, something else was just so distractingly off about reading this. Then I realized it was the backgrounds. they are usually just a gradient of colour. And not just for her thoughts or inner monologues. It was so painfully obvious in chapter 7 with all the disappearing furniture.
Hm yea a lighter makeup which gives a fresh look would suit her the best considering her age too
It's pretty undergraded. I just hope the artist kind of improve? Ig?..
Just say the makeup made her looks ugly
Yea you're right (-_-;)・・・