ok it was cute and all but i didnt like the fact that luca was taking advantage of makoto's innocence like that... i would like it if it went a bit slower... :/ and makoto seemed like a person who couldnt say no to him so went along with luca's bold moves and eventually being new in this kind of things he started liking him... anyway its just what i felt after reading it, only my opinion...
I don’t think that Luca took advantage of him. Makoto seems like an extremely open-minded person, and I don’t think he would be doing this stuff if he didn’t like it from the beginning. Yeah sure Luca kissed him out of the blue but Makoto’s reaction shows that he liked it. It was even him who made the bigger move with the bathing and stuff. Tho I do understand that everything happened quite quickly, I kind of had the same reaction the first time I read it
the bathing thing was totally out of curiosity after seeing a pic of luca's pierced dick ... and luca even took advantage of that by kissing him while getting hard.. as i said he exploited makoto's innocence .. any person who never kissed or had sex would be giving those reaction... and makoto as being too accepting and curious he went with the flow and liked it.. it felt like if it were some girl who came and did those things ,makoto would accept it too.. anyway XD its all just a plot to get the story going .. i just wrote what i thought
Luka and Makoto are the same age and they were both curious. Saying that Luka is "exploited his innocence" makes it sound like he's a child or something. Luka didn't manipulate or force him. Makota accepted Luka's advances cause he wanted to. He knew what he was doing. It seems like a normal relationship between two teenagers to me.
luca has experience.. being same aged has nothing to do with it.. =_= and he obviously exploited mako's innocence.. dont try to sugarcoat it just because its cute.. even though they are same aged luca was mature in many ways,.. and like i said makoto accepted it.. i never said he was forced or manipulated =_=.. please dont twist my words .. and its my opinion.. :/
You didn’t have to say but your words are making it sound that way by saying he exploited his innocence or by saying makoto just went along with it just because like it doesn’t matter if it was his first time if he didn’t like it he would have pushed luca away but he did not and accept of his own will so you saying he exploited his innocence makes no sense#-.-)but whatever as you said it’s your opinion
try reading it again and then reply here.. your reply made no sense.. exploit in its own sense means "make use of" and he did make use of mako's innocence and curiosity at first... and mako accepted it cuz he liked it .. end of discussion... why making a damn debate out of it by arguing here? the amount of stupidity people carries my god !!
yes exactly... its cute of course but too fast for me ... i wanted to see their emotional development more than the physical one..
the way people are trying to debate against what i said seems like i said something wrong ... even going as far as misinterpreting what i said ... ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ look at the triggered ones not understanding what i actually meant ...lol where did i say makoto was forced or manipulated ?!! XD the amount of immature ppl are raising in this site...
Haha yeah... try not to mind them, no use wasting time fighting with random people on the internet. I really didn’t see that much emotional development, Luca just said he fell in love with Makoto and Makoto seemed ok with it... and Luca says he wants Makoto to return to the village to live with him, but he also said same sex love was forbidden? Then why won’t he consider staying there with Makoto? Just puttin it out there hahaha (=・ω・=)
IKRRR !! the whole i love u thing looked a bit too fast, you dont just fall in love and try to have sex the next day!! and exact same thought came to me... it felt selfish for some reason... but ok whatever :/ its just a story anyway..
no im not gonna waste my time replying to internet losers XD...
hehe.. thanks for putting it out there.. hope no one comes to bite you XD ^_^ <3
Well this is smut ofc the author will focus with sex scene, u are right the story too fast...but i think it's because the author have a limit to make a chapter, idk but every bl manga always have 5-6 chapter manga idk its rule or what....personally i still enjoy it since they are cute and the con-sex was good lol
the father leaving his kids to a complete stranger to shower just because the stranger said he will take care of them while the father showers basically shows that he is not fit to be a father at that age.. he still doesnt have the maturity and capability to look after the kids and be as responsible as a father should be.
and its so obvious that he's not happy.. he looks sad.. seems like a young boy who was struck with father's duties ... i actually feel bad for him... hope the wife didnt manipulate him to marry her cuz it sure looks that way(i mean suspicious)... and being alone after losing parents can be quite tough ....so i wont be surprised if he married her out of loneliness
why does it look like those over flashy digital arts people makes ?
this art style is not for manhwa, it looks like digital single piece arts. if it was some single digital artwork then it would be amazing but putting it in a story for panel after panels wont look good... i really miss the art style author used to have.