YeaReadingIsGreat want to read (All 2)
beta
my thing is why did you make this? You could have turned this into something beautiful, or atleast decent with how good your art is. Such as, The son is a good person and teaches uke self worth and how to not be dependent and then they have a nice a little love story, with mystery and drama behind creepy dad death and son taking over company. OR could have made son disgusted with the uke but slowly comes to i don't know, help him become dependent and fall in love. OR to hell with that family and a 3rd party character stumbles upon uke with the son and saves him and they help him with him self love all whilst trying to escape the sons weird obsession. All storylines very cliche but better than this 5 chapter mess of straight up abuse..
Facts just straight facts. There were so many other options for a little dark even but the author took it wayyyy to far
this just pmo
Literally