Canopiss's Manga

It’s amazing how much nothing can be written within a chapter. You know how stories will usually get the ball rolling with the plot around chapter three or four after the characters are introduced? Imagine dragging your feet through the mud with each and every thought that comes to the main character’s head. And it’s not like it’s a lazy story, no not at all. Each time someone goes into their own thoughts about situations and conversations, it’s given the same amount of space as actual plot points. The point of inner thoughts are for them to be quick, happening alongside events, not taking up the majority of chapter. Information is repeated back to the audience like we didn’t just finish the previous chapter. The worst part is that in the middle of these long soap box like monologues, they’re these little comedic portions slapped in the middle. They aren’t funny, nor do they make the chapter interesting. It’s also quite ironic for a webtoon about a poorly written book to also be poorly written. It makes me wonder if the purpose of writer taking their sweet time is to avoid having to actually write the rest of it.

But yeah cool idea. Reminds me of the BL were that guy was a horse hybrid dude.

God smash ain’t enough I wanna feel her wenis tickle my large intestine