guys yk their love story is gonna be boring by ur standards bc our mc changed n sculpted their paths to be filled w joy right??? like did u even read the story before that LMFAOOO
casel ALWAYS loved leah even in the og novel u should’ve seen this coming bye the only reason he’s not obsessive to that extent is that bc he actually received attention as a child
ALSO how ru saying leahs dumb when casel didn’t even know she liked him either none of them said anything abt their feelings they’re both idiots
do i just hate men or is ml just not likable like i don’t feel bad for him i genuinely stare at my screen like this :/ when his internal monologues show up
if i was the saint n ppl treated me like dirt like im telling u if even ONE “person of god” from the temple looked at me the wrong way i’m not fucking using my powers on anyone anymore lol the shows over have fun suffering from 20 plagues idgaf burn me n find a new saint damn
how do u even redeem this mf authors legit need to stop writing the most HORRIBLE n EVIL characters js to try n give them a redemption arc like??? i genuinely don’t even want to see ml happy no fuck that i don’t even wanna see this guy on my screen anymore this shit is ass i can’t read it like i don’t care how he was tricked into thinking mc was a spy bruh if i was betrayed by the person i loved w all my heart i’m not feeding them drugs n raping them until proven innocent like dude id actually rather u kill the poor guy what is wrong w u
like what i don’t feel bad for u bc what is there to feel bad for
kill off this gooner ml bruh
yk it’s rlly telling when the overall best male character is a fucking sword
i feel like the king or brother trying their best to protect mc or us seeing their worries abt him is all useless like ok first of all that isn’t ur son nor ur brother bc my guy committed a LONG time ago like i still think abt og killian n how he won’t be able to see how much his family actually cared for him
bruh i’m glad i don’t have evil ass coworkers like this bc i’m sure i would’ve shot myself on the job n change the trajectory of everyone’s life
u see now the author ruined the whole damn story cuz the only way it’s gonna be a happy ending is if mc starts jumping everyone no warning
but if it was mc following ppl around being a d1 lil ass creep she would’ve been dead by now ok
sorry guys it’s not coming back any time soon bc grandfell is pregnant with our 5th child
“it gets wholesome” blah blah blah “ml gets character development” FUCK NO i saw him playing limbo w satan just the other day don’t fucking lie to me
“will u tell me who it is?” mf asking as if his bumass is gonna be able to do anything like what ur more useless than my pocket lint
the only critique i have abt the harem is lucy bc it feels iffy n that’s genuinely surprising like bc i LIKE the girls legit wouldn’t mind if ed ends up w all of them speaking my truth fr bc i get it bruh like ed is him i would have a crush on him too bye
yeah i can rlly tell that the royal family are close-knit i feel the bond n the love
ngl this is how i see all stories w “doting” regretful single tyrant dads like its not cute it’s literally annoying how bad these ppl are at being kings AND fathers like omg two jobs and u suck at BOTH of them ru serious i would’ve fucking committed during birth too if i was ur wife like no wonder there’s never a mother in these stories
brah this shit was killing me idk how u guys r calling it boring like yeah LMFAO the writing is shit but i was cackling cuz why was this mf pulling out his glock at every minor inconvenience??? like the chasing scene KILLED ME he done cracked his skull open cuz they were playing chase w each other like what was the thought process IN PUBLIC TOO LMFAOO n no one was calling the police bye it’s so ridiculous like imagine a wattpad story written by a 9 yr old but as a manhwa HELP
