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The mc has no personality, yes she may be severely traumatized, but maybe she can atleast show something more than a blank face. The main point, the plot. The plot is overly done with plot holes, it's trying to be something that it didn't achieve. The concept is good but the plot holes remove any good that it had. The ml, he has a personality that maybe chaotic but it's not common to see a tyrant that has some personality and isn't cold or mean. This story is not well made, the art is pretty but I can't keep looking at the fl who keeps having no reaction and there are very rare occasions where she gets embarrassed. Art is art, and when art can't show what the artist ment then the art would look blank, open to interpretation to the reader. If I had to rate this story it would be 4/10