Misa's Favorite

The mc has no personality, yes she may be severely traumatized, but maybe she can atleast show something more than a blank face. The main point, the plot. The plot is overly done with plot holes, it's trying to be something that it didn't achieve. The concept is good but the plot holes remove any good that it had. The ml, he has a personality that maybe chaotic but it's not common to see a tyrant that has some personality and isn't cold or mean. This story is not well made, the art is pretty but I can't keep looking at the fl who keeps having no reaction and there are very rare occasions where she gets embarrassed. Art is art, and when art can't show what the artist ment then the art would look blank, open to interpretation to the reader. If I had to rate this story it would be 4/10

its getting boring and over complicated for no reason. its a story about a girl who wrote fanfiction about the prince for gods sake. it was at its strongest when it focused on rayburn and angela solving shit TOGETHER around the capital, with hoya, mano and the crown prince involved. now rayburn and angela feel like side characters in a political drama. its losing steam because this isnt what it started out as and it doesnt fit or appeal at all.