beta
It started off good but the progress are messy af especially the characters' behavior/attitude. This story has potential but ffs what the heck happened with the FL, I thought she would work hard to become deserving of being called successor so I would expect she would be taught about business and stuff but instead they would deprive her of some good character development. She would always cry I'm not saying that she shouldn't but can we have just a lil bit of development ?. Also it starting to get boring how our FL(a.k.a the daughter of villainess) just replacing the OG FL (a.k.a her half sis) like for example in ch.53 instead of the OG FL, she discovered the knight at the colosseum and then she also has a plan to go into the academy which will the OG FL plans to go. Like I'm tired of this scenario it starting to get boring