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To me it feels a little abrupt how much Tarkan is now into the FL? I remember that he was all about oh I have this childhood love that I’m holding on to and I’m a tuff big man and now all of a sudden he’s acting all jealous and blushing because of her ?? I recall that her defending him against his evil stepmom made him trust her more and stuff but idk the development still seems a little quick to me…?? But as I said maybe I’m forgetting smth idk