beta
Look the story is cute and simple I CAN GET BEHIND THAT ALL DAY, but there’s something…missing? I can’t quite put my finger on it, maybe it’s because so far this has turned out quite anticlimactic? I love the characters, the art, etc. but man was I expecting that MC vs. Broker moment to be way more intense. Like dude you spent so long hunting him down and this is what it was? Don’t get me wrong I’m happy my boy is safe and sound and can go back to doing what he was doing, I just wish it was a TOUCH more exciting or even just a little less predictable? I could tell from the first handful of chapters EXACTLY how this was going to turn out and so far every thought/prediction I had has come true!!! It’s a very cutesy non-serious story so far, very easy read. I’m excited to see it all come to a beautiful happy conclusion. Just so conflicted, I want to like the story more than I do but it’s also gotten a touch boring ig. (〜￣△￣)〜