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Ch. Extra.2

Raw ch. 65

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Well its actually good, but could be better. It sarted good and the flow are also nice, and the story is kinda fresh too, I like the character too, but towards the ending, it felt rushed and many plot holes too. Like the reasoning behind traping mc to the novel the first time, and the ending too, some exrra would be nice tho

End

Good at first but then towards the ending, the chapter are all messed up and I think the loose quite a lot of parts because everything comes out of nowhere. I think this missinh some chapter