somehow the flowing of the story makes no sense, the plot just isn't going right. there has to be convincing details, it's a police work not just..it feels like prank idk.
I agree, the plot is confusing and it's all over the place. I can't get myself to take this seriously but it's so good for some reason smh < Someone who exists >
keep this flow.. allow more feeling to grow.. satisfy us like a pro :3
ps: WTF is wrong with the multi-page button, i can't live like that. please fix it.