I'm reading this and as much as I love June, Edgar and Cameron I also want to scream at them to move on, I'm gonna go on and yap
June, you're cute, you're sweet and I love your story, your conflicting emotions after meeting Cameron is just tasty and I love how your face is so full of guilt and self loathing, you should pursue the arts girl and for your own good maybe stay away from men and go for me huehajcjqhehhrhehajah
Edgar, In-love your face, I think you're a homosexual someway, not exactly gay but you're aro I think. You are a very good fit for the protagonist, like marionetta, you're flawed but I like how despite how calm you are you're so easily played with your emotions, a very good contradicting trait.
Cameron, fuck you (affectionately)
Jokes aside I really like the mystery in Cameron's character, he's definitely human but the sort of secret he has is something I want to observe
Thanks for updating