Mc and Ml are in a toxic relationship. Ml keeps Mc by his side to play with him, Mc is there because he likes him. I think as someone who definitely doesn't read stories like these, I was bad at comprehending what was happening but I managed to get through it when I finished all chapters.
Anyway, little by little, Ml starts to crave more and more affection from Mc, but Mc was getting dick of their toxic relationship, and begins to create a line between them. Ml does more shit stuff and Mc decides that it was time to stop. That's when Ml refuses and realized that Mc was more important to him than he thought he was, and the chasing arc begins.
Ml stays by MC's side, even if he was sleeping with his friend and ml was there to witness. He still stays anyway. ML, of course, does another SHITTY thing of spreading pictures of the two of them having sex. Everyone's disgusted and talks shit, especially about Ml. Mc confonts Ml. Ml says now they only have each other.
Yeah some shit happen BLA BLA mc repeatedly asks ml to start over but ml doesn't wanna until he goes to his dad's house to help with housework and when he came back, ml accepted his offer of starting over. So they do start over. And... They start going out. Idk. Okay.
Idk what to feel.honestly. just glad something entertained me when I was bored.
First, let's start with the top notch plot. Yeah I'll admit it's a toxic storyline, which makes me more invested. I'm not one to read toxic plots cause I'm more into lovey dovey stories, but this one passed my vibe check.
Started off with MC's obsession with ML. Mc thought he just wanted to surpass him because in his eyes ML was a smuggy peice of shit. Which he is, but I'll talk about that later. ML is basically loved by everyone and naturally good at everything, which MC despised. Later in the story it shows that he just wanted ML's eyes on him. He realizes that ML isn't some crazy freak who's perfect all round from highschool days. He knows himself that ML is a human being, but he refused to acknowledge that. But slowly in the late chapters he begins to accept and love the current ML. MC's surprisingly calm through all this.
ML is a jerk. He r*pes MC and I hated that part but I forcibly had to brush it off cause it was a beginning to their quote on quote early chapter relationship. ML in school days knows that MC is obsessed with him and wants to be him but ignored it for both their sakes. He also has went through so much, and was constantly being harassed / groomed by his own teacher. Not only that, I think he was imprisoned the same way black haired dude was. (Forgot his name). Basically this kid went through hell and back.
So MC begins having an extensial crisis if he wants to fuck this dude up or save him and be sorry. In the end he does both cause ML got crazy (maybe an overstatement)
This story didn't show much romance, and I think ML developed feelings halfway their deal but didn't show much. Just showed that he cared for him, and tried cutting him off for his sake. I'm not sure with MC's, though. Maybe it started in highschool days cause it said that he wanted ML's eyes on him when he realized. I just wish I had more of their fluff cause they're so cute
Shittypark got what he deserved and I fucking hate his guts for abusing and r*ping his students. I was so happy when he got jailed. Hope he rots there forever.
Anyway! To wrap it all up, good story, nice plot, love the art style!! Again just wished the story showed more of their romantic feelings (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Great read! Love me a bl with ACTUAL plot!
First, let's start with the top notch plot. Yeah I'll admit it's a toxic storyline, which makes me more invested. I'm not one to read toxic plots cause I'm more into lovey dovey stories, but this one passed my vibe check.
Started off with MC's obsession with ML. Mc thought he just wanted to surpass him because in his eyes ML was a smuggy peice of shit. Which he is, but I'll talk about that later. ML is basically loved by everyone and naturally good at everything, which MC despised. Later in the story it shows that he just wanted ML's eyes on him. He realizes that ML isn't some crazy freak who's perfect all round from highschool days. He knows himself that ML is a human being, but he refused to acknowledge that. But slowly in the late chapters he begins to accept and love the current ML. MC's surprisingly calm through all this.
ML is a jerk. He r*pes MC and I hated that part but I forcibly had to brush it off cause it was a beginning to their quote on quote early chapter relationship. ML in school days knows that MC is obsessed with him and wants to be him but ignored it for both their sakes. He also has went through so much, and was constantly being harassed / groomed by his own teacher. Not only that, I think he was imprisoned the same way black haired dude was. (Forgot his name). Basically this kid went through hell and back.
So MC begins having an extensial crisis if he wants to fuck this dude up or save him and be sorry. In the end he does both cause ML got crazy (maybe an overstatement)
This story didn't show much romance, and I think ML developed feelings halfway their deal but didn't show much. Just showed that he cared for him, and tried cutting him off for his sake. I'm not sure with MC's, though. Maybe it started in highschool days cause it said that he wanted ML's eyes on him when he realized. I just wish I had more of their fluff cause they're so cute
Shittypark got what he deserved and I fucking hate his guts for abusing and r*ping his students. I was so happy when he got jailed. Hope he rots there forever.
Anyway! To wrap it all up, good story, nice plot, love the art style!! Again just wished the story showed more of their romantic feelings (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Great read!
cmon guys give me good angst idc if it's wlw or mlm just give me something angsty
just have sex in another story bro let me read ml has DID right ?
1. He's getting led on
2. They're TOO incompatible
3. First smex scene was too embarrassing
4. Nah, ALL smex scenes were embarrassing
I don't know if I like this or not but my hand itched to close the tab so many times. It's getting boring, and I hope there'll be a chasing arc or angst that'll make up for it. All I want is angst. Thanks
AASA I LOVE THEM SM??? THEIR CHEMISTRY??? CHARACTER DEVOLPMENT??? ART??? SLOWBHRN??? ATRGHH
THEYRE GONNA GET TOGETHER SOON I JUST KNOW IT
I LOVE THE STORYLINE I LOVE THE PLOT I LOVE THE CHARACTERS I LOVE THEIR WAY OF SPEECH AND MOST IMPORTANTLY I will love the angst when one of them gets on the death bed (I js know it'll happen lmao)
GO.GO MY LOVE SHIN AND BLONDE EMINEM
Soooo
This was slow paced, and I really like that. What irks me off is their big age gap and student/friendofhisteacher dynamic .. Ml is 35 and Mc is I think 21-24. I mean, still legal but it's quite questionable.
Mc is too nosy and doesn't mind his own business, I can't even defend him cause he's a grown ass man but he's very childish. I wanted to know more of Ml and ml's ex bf background or the ml and mc backstory themselves but it focused on the present storyline more. So unlike other MC's where I act like I know him alot and understand his actions, I felt like a spectator reading this. The perspective switches so it felt like an actual 3rd view story.
Another thing, ML using MC as a replacement !?!??
Tbf, MC himself forced him too but I wish ML took it more maturely (even tho I know he tried to but he still did it)
I didn't like how MC pounced on ML and tried to force him. I'm all it for the consent sorry guys..
But the angst was really good. Mc misunderstood and Ml realize his feelings. I felt sad too when ml went to his ex and reconciled.
And I love MC's male friend! I forgot his name but I think it was seojoon and he was really nice. He's aware of the atmosphere and offers mc help. We aren't given much of MC's other friends too, or ML's friends. So yeah it really just focused on the two of them.
Also, the ml and the ex!?!? Student-teacher !?? This story itself is questionable but their story was even more ...(⊙…⊙ )
Rather than missing and loving his ex, ML was more guilty he caused harm for the ex. And I don't know who to defend because the ex was a student at that time and was probably horrified. Maybe both shouldn't be defended?
Tldr: I don't know what to feel but I love Seojoon
ml: seme / muwan
mc: uke / wuyi
ex: juhee
mc friend: seojoon
Anyway, thanks for the read!
MC's confession was pushed far back even though he had a lot of opportunities to tell him to clear up the misunderstanding but apparently he didn't.. I could count like 3 right now
I have no idea what the hells going on with the plot.
1. Boss liked him because he was sassy (but I think there's more to that)
2. Mc is oblivious and assuming, and ml is a guy who doesn't care what people think of him. I think we all know where that goes.
3. Ml is rude to him (and surprisingly likes him) i want to think that it was before he started but nonetheless for a boss-worker he was rude
4. I like the comedy in this but the rest are...well, uh.
5. I don't get the grape
I have more to say but I can't remember what it is. But I'll be reading just to finish this.
I love the two of them so much I could relate too,.although it isn't as long as 8 years I had a crush on a dude for a whole grade. Unlike them tho we just drifted apart
some ppl here apparently don't like the smut but i like it cause boy would I ever see two hot rock built men having rough sex with emotions