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First, let's start with the top notch plot. Yeah I'll admit it's a toxic storyline, which makes me more invested. I'm not one to read toxic plots cause I'm more into lovey dovey stories, but this one passed my vibe check.
Started off with MC's obsession with ML. Mc thought he just wanted to surpass him because in his eyes ML was a smuggy peice of shit. Which he is, but I'll talk about that later. ML is basically loved by everyone and naturally good at everything, which MC despised. Later in the story it shows that he just wanted ML's eyes on him. He realizes that ML isn't some crazy freak who's perfect all round from highschool days. He knows himself that ML is a human being, but he refused to acknowledge that. But slowly in the late chapters he begins to accept and love the current ML. MC's surprisingly calm through all this.
ML is a jerk. He r*pes MC and I hated that part but I forcibly had to brush it off cause it was a beginning to their quote on quote early chapter relationship. ML in school days knows that MC is obsessed with him and wants to be him but ignored it for both their sakes. He also has went through so much, and was constantly being harassed / groomed by his own teacher. Not only that, I think he was imprisoned the same way black haired dude was. (Forgot his name). Basically this kid went through hell and back.
So MC begins having an extensial crisis if he wants to fuck this dude up or save him and be sorry. In the end he does both cause ML got crazy (maybe an overstatement)
This story didn't show much romance, and I think ML developed feelings halfway their deal but didn't show much. Just showed that he cared for him, and tried cutting him off for his sake. I'm not sure with MC's, though. Maybe it started in highschool days cause it said that he wanted ML's eyes on him when he realized. I just wish I had more of their fluff cause they're so cute
Shittypark got what he deserved and I fucking hate his guts for abusing and r*ping his students. I was so happy when he got jailed. Hope he rots there forever.
Anyway! To wrap it all up, good story, nice plot, love the art style!! Again just wished the story showed more of their romantic feelings (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Great read! Love me a bl with ACTUAL plot!