The art is great. You have great elements that are in your story. I have no problem with the length of this story or anything that isn't the reason why I dropped so long ago and just now rediscovered it. I think that the creators/ creator gave themself a big job with this one. They put a lot in this from the start, up until where I have read.
There were certain plot points that didn't need to be there but it had to be there for conflict in the modern world which I think was a lot. If it was just the conflict that was happening in the past and then some less toned down conflict in the modern world that would be fine but with a lot always happening it made the story feel like it was never going to end.
But from what I have seen THINK that this is the creators/creator first one they have ever made. Despite writing choices and some other things since this is their first looking at this from a possible growth side I think that later hopefully they will write and make something else after this that will be a bit more polished since they did a lot with this.
Ok so like one question. How the fuck is Kouichi alive. He got his back utterly dismantled 3 times and was even begging for more and now he wants to have more sex to please Caius. This man should be dead or maybe he has a death wish wtf.
Side note them just talking and like the little kiss scene. Fucking adorable.
You know what I am actually extremely happy with this outcome. He doesn't expect everyone to just forgive him and he is actually making an attempt to apologize with that in mind. He is also seeing a therapist and taking his medication which is a huge start. I'm also glad he apologized to Hye-sung and Byul. I know byul is little but let's normalize apologizing to children as well because they also have feelings.
You know what I love this strength that I am seeing from Param. He is being a lot more upfront with the fact that he doesn't feel good and not only that but he gave that guy a piece of his mind. It's also clear that he is done putting himself in situations that he doesn't like and it was so clear that he was happier with Hwi but Hwi clearly had some stuff happen in his past and is too scared to be too clear about what he wants and Param doesn't get every hint.
I'm honestly more for Hwi and Param just because if they were to talk their relationship could just develop into an, even more, healthier one and I would love it.