The Twin Siblings’ New Life
Overall I enjoyed the story and I think the characters are really charming and wholesome….but it has some major problems that hold it back from being really good.
1. the fact that the twins are reincarnated has very little impact on the actual story. I feel like it was only included because people like reading stories like that, but in this case you could easily take out that part of the story and it would essentially be exactly the same.
2. The male twin gets sidelined HARD towards the end. As I was reading I did notice a shift towards the female twin being the focus, but I assumed that the male twin would eventually have an arc focused on him as well. But of course that never came…
It’s really sad to see a character you’ve grown attached to suddenly being treated as a side character.
That being said, I think this story definitely had the makings to be really good but fell just short of that. I feel the author needed more time to work on the story before they made this, or maybe they could redo it in the future? I doubt that will happen, but it’d be nice if they did.
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