
I feel like it would be much more realistic and better for the development of the story if they made the time before the rebellion longer. The queen would be able to regain a better connection with her subjects she wrongfully imprisoned, rebuilt trust with black hair boy, and just more backstory with every character in general. The story just feels super rushes and no matter how competent your subjects are it’s quite unrealistic to do it all in a day. And where are the challenges the mc faces when being transported into a whole new world with a full plate on her hands? Don’t get me wrong, it’s still an interesting read but it isn’t at its full potential.
Other than the spoilers, this story is bland and unrealistic. Like cmon seriously, the beginning was a major red flag already. Why would you casually carry around such an important thing? So Zion blackmailed/coerced FL into dating him and she just agreed to it :/
The FL is so dumb and the plot is just not it. Everyone in this story kinda sucks and it’s hard to like any of them. I kept reading, hoping it would get better but it keeps getting worse.