beta
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So far its a bit.. Boring? The plot is kinda cool I guess but it seems very inconsistent and confusing.. I dont know what their goal is, what they're fighting, or what they're doing anything for. They just seem to be doing random things that don't seem to he affecting much, and if it does, it's slow and happens raely. The only interesting thing is their character relationships but it happens so rarely that their characters progress and if they do, it seems to take one step forward and seven steps back. As though he trusts him and adores him, and then suddenly he doesn't.. I guess the lack of conflict is the problem. Plus his goal of returning home isn't highlighted as much as it should be.