Zeus: "I hate humanity because they rape, hey Priapus, go and do some corrective rape yeah?"
Did not leave the greatest taste in my mouth, gotta be honest. There were waaaay better ways to structure this, like maybe not involving corrective rape for one?? 'Cause that really gross?? The only salvageable plot element was the red string, and the design of the mob boss was very good. I like the idea of Priapus! A kind of Aphrodite/Cupid character that joins in the action and then sets up some couples; totally fine with that. It's the mean-spirited plot of "Let's /make/ people a certain sexuality, and also kill them." When the underlying reason of "Let's fuck" is "Because I actually want you dead" that's a little bit of a turn off for me tbh
Did not leave the greatest taste in my mouth, gotta be honest. There were waaaay better ways to structure this, like maybe not involving corrective rape for one?? 'Cause that really gross?? The only salvageable plot element was the red string, and the design of the mob boss was very good. I like the idea of Priapus! A kind of Aphrodite/Cupid character that joins in the action and then sets up some couples; totally fine with that. It's the mean-spirited plot of "Let's /make/ people a certain sexuality, and also kill them." When the underlying reason of "Let's fuck" is "Because I actually want you dead" that's a little bit of a turn off for me tbh
2018-07-16 08:46 marked
There are ways this could work - but not like this