
The latest scene between tess and arthur, which is arthur lying on the hospital bed after his fight with one of the retainers (i forgot which) and tess leaning on him while sitting on the same bed, is lowk rlly awkward. cuz just before arthur had set off for his trip to fight that retainer, arthur literally had just criticised tess for being immature. so why is tess suddenly acting so close to him?? Even if arthur had almost died, i wouldnt expect tess to be snuggling up to bro when he literally js disparaged her like 15 chapters ago. Its either i missed the part where arthur apologised or they forgot about that part cuz it rlly isnt logical that tess wld be acting like that after a mini fight.
Also, why are the authors just ignoring the fact that tess is now a silver core? It doesnt make sense for her to just be sitting on the sidelines with 3 group members trying to climb up the military ranks. I get that shes now in a higher position after fighting on the battlefield for a bit but isnt a silver core already enough for a higher position in the army? Plus, she has a beast will with her as well so I rlly dont understand why she has to climb from the bottom to rise up in position. Maybe its because her grandfather wants her to prove herself and her will, but i feel that the silver core is rlly wasted. Unless my understanding of what is strong in this world is wrong, tess shouldnt be made to work her way up considering her grandfather is already a general that can easily give her the position.
idk this is js my opinion, dont take it so srsly

I understand that they are in the middle of a war and lowk wldnt have the time to argue abt whos a child and whos not but at the very least there should be at least some sense of awkwardness between them when arthur woke up, not just immediate snuggling. Idk im not an expert in romance and situations like that but if i were arthur, id feel a twinge of guilt for scolding tess and wldnt voluntarily snuggle up with her.

-The start and end of the story dont match at all, at the start it was minorly implied that our MC wld stay in the game universe yet in the end he suddenly left back to the real world??? maybe MC will go back w black hair in the side stories but ts lowk dont match up.
-Wdym MC is suddenly in love w black hair?? what??? from what ive read and rmb so far, MC pretty much didnt like black hair cuz bro went to nibble on him or smt (i dont rlly rmb). So why does he suddenly have feelings for black hair now?? like there was literally no scene that showed rhe development of MC's feelings for black hair even tho that literally is the basis of the romance genre. And lowk from what i see, black hair likes MC unnecessarily, if i were him, id merely see MC as a tool to get my shit tgt, not fall in love w him or anything, now i get that black hair met MC when he was young or smt, but that MC and the current MC now were completely 2 different ppl?? so why tf does he like MC???? shldnt he be kinda resenting MC for stealing his crush's body???
idk man this is just my take, yall are free to hve ur opinions. I js think that ts story had so much potential but yet it was all gone to waste....

i feel bad for the brown haired guy. he liked mc before mc even met ml and before he cld even begin his pursuit mc was alr stolen away for good. i mean technically it was his fault as well for not acting first but its still kinda pitiful. and the fact the ml is still provoking him after the revelation of news.... i feel bad
camus lowk pmo