it's a cute story, adorable art and MCs... but most of the plot either it doesn't make sense or it's messy and rushed. eshana's identity is the main mystery but she kind of ignores what happenend or what she discovered for 5-8 whole chapters.Then, she remembers and is shocked. but again, 5 chapters go by and BOTH MCs forget about it.
my recomendations is to read without question author's plot decitions and just scroll thought boring parts.