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I left this one to marinate for a couple months, came back to check what's up, both the main guys still suck ass SO GOD DAMN BAD it's insane. They deserve eachother. Miserably ever after in hell. Hand in unlovable hand. Etc. It takes some skill to make both your main characters so deeply incredibly unlikable AND uninteresting from the start all the way to the finish, but this author has pulled it off spectacularly.