I felt like it was going too fast://.. it feels like the author squeezed the story in 4 chapters. It felt forced, and the development went way to fast.. suddenly the characters changed their minds overnight. It's like they gave her a limit of 4 chapters..
The plot is good.. very well written. The pacing was a bit of a turn off... would've been perfect if the chapters were atleast 7-10 chapters maybe..? I feel like, there's much more to it. I couldn't gasp the story and the characters...
It's just my opinion tho
Agree on that, if this was more slow paced and characters were given more time and possibilities to grow into each other as for me it wouldve lived up to doukyuusei but I think its still good since time thing in this one is kinda off,so its easy to fill in their interactions,also since it has sequel where like 7chapters are filled with that kind of development this one still manages to be one of my face,but honestly its mostly because of art and I adore the way endou is drawn
10 years old??? What?!??
They started dating when they were 10 years old?!,!?!11?!? And lasted for 10 years!?!?!!?!1?1!11
I need to lay down..
They were probably best friends and "playing boyfriendxgirlfriend"... And their relationship evolved as they both grow up. It would be more realistic if they started dating at 13, 14 or 15... But I guess the author wanted the protagonist to still be on his early 20's and not on his late 20's...