This one is slow burn and speed running at the same time. Like? When the pain will end PLEASE
The top is so big that bottom is giving 150cm tall and he is also looks so healthy despite being malnourished for DAYS w injuries/rape. Like i dont wish for realism in bls but these are the plot points, no?
This is what happens when authors still want to go by heteronormativity when writing two males.
Unironically i'm rooting for the warden and foreigner omega's happy ending.
oh my goddd i wish this whole story was about jian. why is he so sensual like i cannot explain it
They both have the personality of...nothing? hello? they feel so dead like they r just drawings, not a story, not a character. Nothing.
This would be incredibly better if the top was indeed an omega and bottom was a beta. Art is so good but yea :(
i feel so sorry for the guard most cuz he is like the nicest guy in this and he always gets taken advantage of like damn dude quit your fucking job. he also says that he is an alpha but he gets influenced by other alphas and that scar? so sus.
One thing about the art style is how aware author is when she is writing an intercultural relationship. their skin tone for example, as a korean person j.j is significantly darker than leo, which is so nice to see after seeing paper white koreans nonstop in manhwas. Also author making j.j bigger than leo when asians are often stereotypically shown as short and small is such a cheff kiss decision. Really love how you can tell there was so much thought put into it with fully knowing that an korean person did make this. Nerd project also gives the same feeling as this, it just feels good to read something so detailed and accurate.
People acting like jian is not the only interesting character in the story got me giggling.
Mieum is the most cliche weak bottom who needs his top daddy uwu baby twink, jitae is like "i will protect you bunny but you follow my orders for safety" meanwhile jin is only giving "i am obsessed with you because you smiled at me once"
I wouldve dropped this story if it wasnt for jian.
I think this kid went through something traumatic as a kid and this is why he is so naive and slow. I hope rather than only fucking him, the top can teach him how to live as a normal human being.
I dont think jian loves jin. Not yet. Not in the way jin wants it to be. I think jian both loved and cared for jitae and jin the same way as his little brothers in a messy household. Jin was clearly jealous of jian's attention for jitae though. I think jian will soon realize that the sex he wanted from jin is not gonna turn out as nonchalant as he likes, he will develop feelings.
Jian just needs ONE person to truly take care of him with no motivations, i dont know if jin's obsession can be that for him for now. This is why 2nd couple is so GOOOOOOD.
2nd couple is so GOOD that i wish the whole series was about them only
A realistic japanese yaoi where we see them grow up, their adult struggles, realistic and beautiful portrayal of families and actually them getting married. This is such a good refreshing story to read.
Art is fine, characters and designs are good. Story and idea is really interesting but goddamn the actual storytelling in this is kinda messy. I feel like author is a bit amateur w the way they make storyboards between plot and smut, the flow is a bit off. Hope they improve cuz story is storying
The new guy will think that bottom's asshole is free real estate and will make a move which will make the top guy realize his feelings due to his possessiveness and jealousy. Real original and i will be eating this up every damn time!! GIMME NOW