
Probably an unpopular opinion amongst fans of this manga but i think it’s been drawn out for too long. When I first read this back in 2020 I was intrigued by the plotline, I love the main couples dynamic and how it was untraditional with a small top and big bottom. It was intriguing and they’re just so silly and loving that I stayed to read, now it’s 5 years later and it’s still updating.
I’m glad that the author was motivated enough to continue and add more and more to their story and evolving their characters. But as more chapter releases it feels like a one piece filler arc. It’s like, sex, conflict, climax build up, peace, sex, conflict, climax build up and peace. I understand that the story is suppose to follow the games story in chronological order in meeting all of the heroes but after around 55 chapters I lost my interest.
I’m sure it’s just me but there should be a sort of balance with how the chapters are being produced but yknow I’m not their editor and people seem to still like it so idk. I hope eventually once it’s finished I can read it all in one go, atp I kinda just want Eve to just be evil and rule the world and Gozu gushing over him. But Eve’s story has changed because of Gozu and maybe that’s for the best, whatever Eve does I know he’s gonna have Gozu by his side and that’s all that matters.

I think it also has to do with the publisher, they're notorious for slicing up whats supposed to be 1 chapter into at least 3 or 4 "chapters". It's how they milk more money...but I do think the plot did drag out more than it should have on some points but hopefully with this saintess arc, we'll see more of the over arching plot

Honestly yeah I can see that being the case. I think another drawn out manga would be “Caressing the nipples of a hibernating bear” and that has I think over 100 chapters and ongoing? I’m not a fan of the story and only read up till maybe 10 chapters and I stopped awhile ago.
But the way the chapters are being released seems similar, I mean how many more chapters do you need with a title talking about touching a hybrid bear’s Hershey kisses? Maybe I should test it out myself to see if I can score 200 chapters

I agree! I love how it's building on the actual world and how it works, adding to such filth-fillled smut. While I understand the idea that it may be drawn out, I genuinely don't think so. Especially since you can see how individually, it starts to find the actual arc on making the friends of the hero trust Eve. The plot is just SO good alongside the smut, not despite it!

Funny asf they almost crushed that dollar tree Saja boys reject, I hope in the next season Nanjo can just admit that he likes Mokyeon . But I know for a fact that Sunhwa is gonna make a big deal out of it and be bitter, possibly even guilt tripping Nanjo to take him back or something and it’s gonna be hella annoying

Omg why did they do the omega dirty like that, i don’t know if there’s side stories but the author should at least maybe have a side story for hye-seong. I honestly like Hye-seong and the small exploration of his insecurities, all he wanted was to be loved and now he got fucked over by Man Dicklet 1 (Minjun) and Man dicklet 2 (Yuri)

That’s true, especially this chapter Hye-Seong isn’t safe without any criticism. It was his desperate act to feel like he’s gonna be loved if he had a fated mating pair due to witnessing his mother being abandoned and bro was like psssh that’s not gonna to me I’m different from yall… no… the big boobed blonde man and his chopped haired beta hussie pretty much crushed and took advantage of him for Yuri’s weird goal.
In the he was able to communicate with Yuri even Yuri admits that he did take advantage of Hye-Seong which I give him credit for, though they were ‘compatible’ they parted ways. Hye-Seong now knows that there’s no room for him especially seeing how Minjun was with Yuri in that chapter.
For that I can’t help but feel a bit empathic towards him, yes what he tried to do was wrong there’s no question in that I just wish the author was lenient enough to give him a side story where he sees his mistake and choose who he wants to be with carefully and the other person truly loving him back. Though coming from this author I doubt we’ll have that since their other works don’t contain a side story like Butterfly trap that does have a potential side story couple.

I’m all up for size difference and legal ages but the so called 20 year old has literal kid proportions. I know short people exist being that I’m 4’11 and over the age of 18 but like this is just borderline fetish at this point.
Being treated like a kid even when you’re short is already humiliating as an adult so I feel for the character, maybe the artist should’ve made the short guy at least a little more mature looking but idk that’s just me. None the less this is yaoi slop to the max

I’m glad I’m not the only one that thinks this plot is dangerously similar to another work on here, even the seme look alike sorta. It kinda feels like someone who did read Affair of others depends on compare slaves and saw how it was slow burning too much and decided to make this very compact and put a little more focus on the relationship of the couple then tweaked some of their characters.
Not entirely a bad thing but… it’s just lacking and it’s bar to bar almost aside from the guy turning into a dog or something

This used to be my fav a long time ago and I haven’t read it again since. Stumbled upon it in my notes list from 8 years ago and decided to read it, but after rereading it again it is totally not what I expected. Maybe my taste back then was clouded by 2010s yaoi troupes thinking this was ok, it’s not as good as I thought I remembered it. The more you know.

I wanna theorize that maybe the stuff about bro wanting to fall in love and boombayah with the vampire dude could be his dads memory, and after he died he harbored a lot of hate and obsession after death that it unintentionally placed a curse on his son to make him act like that. Pretty much prevents the son from killing him because of those thoughts.
It’s too soon to say but it’s probably a generational curse that connects the master and bro, then whatever the masters backstory has going on

What is up with the side story, cause why did it have to be gangr*pe. It could literally be anything else, not saying that stories with sensitive topics shouldn’t exist but the way it plays out was kinda trashy. Here I thought when the snake guy said that the white haired dude was a slut was me thinking that he was just doing sex work in his previous life and he was jealous, no it was just straight up rape and he got taken advantage of that’s not being a “slut” HES A VICTIM
I guess you can’t expect much from a literal snake god
Taking fuck to death literally